Heylo and salutations.

Well everyone, there was one thing which I've been planning on writing for quite a while, and that was writing my own stories in my own created world. I've recently begun on this and I've published one short story and two chapters in my first novel in this world.

Basically, what I intend to do is create a whole fantasy world and have a large, World War 2-styled conflict in it, with every kind of combat and situation imaginable. Suffice to say, I really want to go into the details of the whole thing and I already made a map using the Nbos Fractal mapper. The map isn't colored or really detailed, but it'll do for my purposes. Also I've written a good deal of details and 'created' some airplanes and ship classes, as well as having ideas for land based stuff in mind. I decided to just start writing and make up the details as I go rather than spend too much time worrying about the details and not getting any stories done. I've got a lot of work to do and a lot of 'word spreading' to get as much audience as possible, but I hope to build a small, but dedicated fanbase to my stuff... who knows? I might even give Bernard Doove a run for his money!

Here's a link to my short story, the link to the other is on the left hand side of the screen.

http://www.sffworld.com/community/story/1945p0.html

Please read them and gimme some comments!

Till next time stay cool

Altho the subject doesn''t appeal at all to me to read, my tastes are hardly valueble critics to you.

But I read one story, 3 pages, couldn't find the other two.. Or did you mean 3 stories is one story with 3 pages?

Anyhow, I liked the way you manage to plunge the reader into the situation so rapidly, the introducton was short but strong. It shifted in the beginning a few times from sentence to sentence in a rather raw way, but it worked for me anyhow! Not really a bad point in this particular story. Possible intended as well.

And the dialog is really a strong point for you. I like your writing, it's very fluent, no stale moments at all really. And quality dialog.

Keep up the good work, for the right audience that is some quality writing.

Ooh and there is more, I hate my browser. xP Read 3 pages anyhow.